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2) I got a lot of positive feedback on my last elevator pitch. People provided me with some really solid suggestions and offered ideas that would make my service easier to market.3)I tried to put more range in my voice and not appear as stiff based off the feedback in my previous video. I also tried to state the name of my service multiple times so it would stick in the consumers mind.
Ethan,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on your elevator pitch! I like how you ended it by saying that you would love to tell people more about if there was more time; this encourages potential customers to want to find out more. Similar to my elevator, pitch, the diversity of range in your voice was key to making a pitch intriguing. I do want to advice you to make your camera more level with your head and to dress a little more professional. Other than that, your pitch was fantastic. If you get a chance, please check out my elevator pitch at http://innovationnation101.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html.
I think you did a great job with making sure the name of your business was known, the purpose of your business was clear and your voice and demeanor made it sound exiting. I agree with the other commenter that the camera angle could be improved, and you could also be more business casual in your dress instead of just casual. All in all though, you succeeded in making me want to know more about your idea! You can see my elevator pitch at http://entreprenuerintraining.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html.
ReplyDeleteI think your idea is really valuable and that you did an excellent job of explaining it in the short amount of time that an elevator pitch requires. Also, the angle that you tilted your camera at makes you look really tall and it demands respect for your pitch. I thought you spoke clearly and I enjoyed listening to what you said and I definitely want to hear more like you promised.
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